Footage editing - 2

I decided to remove several clips, and cut around two minutes in total from the whole set of footage. When I had cut the clips to ensure continuity, and a smooth transition from one clip to the next, i then decided to include some editing such as 'fade out' with the introduction, and some flashes when the gun is held up to the camera, to make it symbolise gunfire.
This editing to produce a new clip, was cut down to just under 2:30, and seemed to be a big improvement from the origional trailer clip i had made for this.
Here is the video so far;




Now i just need to concentrate on the sound/music to relate to this set of footage, which will include a voice-over, and a possible soundtrack overlayed in the background.