Draft 1 - Film trailer

This is the initial draft of the trailer for my film "The Hunt". It was a test to see what my origional camera shots and editing would look like, this is NOT the final product. It did however make me realise the many shots, use of editing and addition of mise en scene which i would need to consider including, as this looks very basic, the use of long, static camera shots.

There are many errors i noticed straight away with this;

• Continuity problem with hand to chair
• Clothing lacks connection to character type
• Sound and voice-over needed
• More variety of shots
• Mise en scene needed to be changed slightly

This is just in brief terms, in the next video to be posted will be shots of the improvements which have been made to the shots after the discussions.